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Monday 2nd June 2008

Dear Mr Clarkson,

         I am writing to you because I have created a wonderful chocolate bar that I would like you to produce and sell. It would be grateful if you could produce and sell my chocolate bar (I think you are a great chocolate company).

         I am Brook  the head of Mega Choca Stars. I created the chocolate bar with my team. I have put a mouth-watering sample on the letter.

         My chocolate bar tastes creamy in the centre then the rest of the chocolate is milk chocolate. The look (shape) of my chocolate is a cuboid.  The texture of my chocolate is had. My chocolate bar smells lovely when you smell the sent it make you drift to the chocolate. The wrapper of my chocolate is a bit funky it has stars and lots more. I want all kinds of ages to experience my chocolate.

          I am just trying to say that I want you produce and sell my chocolate bar(please could you do what I say).

Your Sincerely

Brook J