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The Ghostly woman

Thu, 07/02/2008 - 16:38 — Alan W

This week I have been learning the story of The Ghostly Woman. It was really fun I got to be the Grandad and Josh was the Dad, Keeley got to be the mum and lewis got to be the baby we all had fun and I hope we do it again and I hope you do acting to thank you for reading.

Alan

 

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Thu, 07/02/2008 - 17:12 — Mr Furness

Mr Furness

Alan,

Just wanted to say thanks for posting, I'll upload your podcast this evening if I get a moment. So much learning is taking place and I enjoy seeing it all here in front of me, long after the bell as gone!

One of your targets is to improve my own writing and find any mistakes. I wonder if you could find any here? We can move you closer to the treasure on the map if you can find ways of improving your writing above :-)

Mr Furness

 

Fri, 08/02/2008 - 14:20 — Joshua R

joshua R

 Nice work Alan I read your story it was great.

Wed, 20/02/2008 - 15:49 — Asran U

asran

good Alan I like your blog. Can you coment on my blog?.I will ad some more stuf on my blog and I will edit my blog

Fri, 21/03/2008 - 20:58 — Alan W

Alan

Thanks Asran :-)