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Poem!!

Thu, 04/12/2008 - 14:30 — Abbi N02

 

Poem !!

 

Who is it ?

 

This person is a lovely Red

And s sunny Friday ,

Some pink lipstick

And a pair of skinny jeans

She is a long pink limo

with HSM vidos

And some magazines

 

This person is Toni . C

 

By Abbi 1

 

Comments

Thu, 04/12/2008 - 14:32 — Abbi N02

Abbi 1

Its a bit rushed because i was rushing

Thu, 04/12/2008 - 18:48 — Mrs Ketley

Mrs Ketley

Wow Abbi! I was delighted to read your metaphor poem on this site! So, you really were listening after all! Well done, I am really impressed that you remembered the order of the objects! I think you will be due some housepoints...are you in Hurst? Only joking! I hope that you are feeling better? Take care from ~Mrs Ketley.