My Dialogue

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 12:11 — Jonathan S

In literacy today me Nat, Alan, Charlie, Alex and Molly had the chance to use the Mac Books again. We had to write a dialogue this is my one.

Lo: To write a dialogue between characters. Tuesday 3rd June 2008

Scene 1

The last golden ticket is found!

"I've won I've one!" Shouted Charlie with excitement.

"What did you say?" asked Grandma Georgina in surprise.

"What" said mum and dad

"Did you say what I thought you did" said grandpa Joe in excitement and jumping around for the first time in a long while.

"He's acutely on his feat!" said mum in surprise.

"Charlie" said mum again "You have to get ready now because you are going tomorrow!"

Comments

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 13:22 — Nat L

I really enjoyed how you used interesting words to explain how they said it.

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 13:24 — Alan W

Jon I liked the bit when you used the intresting words there were nice bits inperticular like exciting it was great to get the chance to comment.

good job.

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 13:29 — Charlie H

Nice work i like the words like shouted but you kind of forgot that you used said 4 times.

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 13:34 — Alexandra S

Hi Jonathan, I really liked the words you used ike "He is actually on his feet" said Mum in amazment.
See Ya Later
Alexandra S

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 13:34 — Alan W

really nice work jon.