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Dialogue

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 12:10 — Alan W

 To write a dialogue between two characters.  3.6.08

 

 

 

Dialogue between charlie and grandpa Joe

 

 

" I have just got to the factory gates I was exited it's a one of a life time  oppotunity because it;s not every day to go to the amazing chocolate factory and to thourt I almost threw my oppotunity away.finally the gates opened and we saw a chow. Then we saw Mr Wonker."

"Hello my name is Mr Wonker welcome to my factory,He shouted."

Gandpa whispered to me come on less get an apple there a juicey."

"ok." I replied.

"Charlie."

"yes grandpa." I said.

"Do you like the factory charlie because I think it is amazing."

"So do I it is great."

Comments

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 13:35 — Nat L

Nat

I like how you mist a line wen another characters speks

Tue, 03/06/2008 - 20:46 — Alan W

Alan

Hay Nat thanks for the comment but you spelt speak wrong it's

S.P.E.A.K.