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In class we have been writing letters. We wrote two letters one was writing a thank you letter to Mr Willy Wonka for letting Charlie Bucket visit the chocolate factory and the other was a letter to persuade the Cadbury's factory make our chocolate that we designed our selves here is mine: 

Cadbury's World                                              Kings Road Primary School

  Linden Road                                                                           Kings Road

Bournville                                                                                   Chelmsford

Birmingham                                                                               Essex

B3O 2LU                                                                                   CM1 2BB

Monday 2nd June 2008

Dear Mrs Crenshaw,

I am writing to you to persuade you to make my chocolate bar in your factory to sell in the shops. It would be an honor if you did and I'm sure it would be a delightful treat for anybody. My chocolate bar is called Egyptian Smarties. I would like you to sell my chocolate bar all around the world and I would like you to produce my chocolate bar because I Love your chocolate and you make it with such care.

My name is Miss Mindy Henshing. I love to design things and make them myself at home. I have never tried to persuade someone to Make my chocolate bar and sell it . It would be great if you could. I am 20 years old and I can never stop designing things at home.

My chocolate bar has a rich Orange flavour. There is a lovely Soft centre that melts in your mouth like an ice cube in the sun. There is a lovely crunchy filling around the Soft centre. It is a delicious chocolate bar that will make your mouth water.

I would like to here from you soon and I hope that you can make up your mind wether you want to produce my chocolate bar. there is a sample of the chocolate bar attatched to the bottom of this letter.

Yours Sincerely Mindy Henshing.