Pop Ups

 

Hi i am billy and i am writing about my popup.A popup is a 3D picture that shows what  I want to do when I grow up.I chose a footballer because it is my favorite sport. I used to want to be a bus driver but I changed my mind. when I was 4 I had a VIP tour around the old chelmsford bus station. It was so cool!!!

 Thankyou for reading my blog entry.I will write more soon!

Billy

 

Comments

TOM

COOL BILLY!!!!!!!!!

TOM

COOL WORK BILLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

billy

thank you tom

Mr Furness

Hello Billy,

Great post! Thank you for sharing your ambitions for the future. Good luck with becoming a footballer. You are practicing all the time during breaks and lunchtimes, so who knows!

Do you think you could have a go at adding a picture to your writing? Is there a picture of your pop-up in the list of pictures?

Mr Furness

Megan C

Great piece of work but some of your I's are NOT capitals!!

megan c

Jonathan

Hi Billy I really like your Blog but there is meant to be a capital letter in Pop ups and a finger space inbetween Pop and ups.

From JONATHAN!

Billy P

 

thanks Jon