Hi Angelica it looks a lot better now and alot essayer to understandnow. My favourte part is when you say (Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!) Great Job! From Jonathan
Hi Angelica, What a fantastic acrostic poem!
My favourite line has to be
Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!
See Ya
Alexandra S
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billy p
hi Angelica,
im not saying i dont like the old acrostic poem but the right one is a bit better because it makes more sense
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:^)billy:^)
Jonathan S
Hi Angelica it looks a lot better now and alot essayer to understandnow. My favourte part is when you say (Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!) Great Job! From Jonathan
Alexandra S
Hi Angelica, What a fantastic acrostic poem!
My favourite line has to be
Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!
See Ya
Alexandra S
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I love chocolate