CHOCOLATE!


            Hi everyone, this is my right acrostic poem.

Chocolate is great.

How much do you like it?

Oooh! Chocolate.

Can't resist it.

Oh dear!

Lick it quick before it melts.

Although chocolate is yummy.It makes my....

Tummy aches.

Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!

                                                                  By Angelica

 

Comments

billy p

hi Angelica,
im not saying i dont like the old acrostic poem but the right one is a bit better because it makes more sense

c
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:^)billy:^)

Jonathan S

Hi Angelica it looks a lot better now and alot essayer to understandnow. My favourte part is when you say (Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!) Great Job! From Jonathan

Alexandra S

Hi Angelica, What a fantastic acrostic poem!
My favourite line has to be
Enjoy it but don't eat too much or else you'll turn out fat!
See Ya
Alexandra S

I love chocolate

I love chocolate