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Spring

Sat, 10/05/2008 - 07:27 — Angelica C03

    For Homework we have to write a poem about spring and this is what I wrote:

            Spring, Spring, Spring

             is almost here.

             Spring, Spring, Spring

            the sky will be so clear.

            Spring is time to cheer,

         For us, young and dear.

          Spring, Spring, Spring,

        Rain, Rain, Rain,

        on the leaves

       And the eaves.

         Take your airy April flight,

       Through the merry April light.

                                                                        By Angelica

Comments

Sun, 11/05/2008 - 08:48 — Mr Furness

Mr Furness

Another fantastic poem. Brilliant Angelica. I really liked your rhythmic "Spring, Spring, Spring" idea. Spring is my favourite time of the year, is it yours too?

Very well done for sharing your poem online for others to read and enjoy.

2HP :-)

Sat, 17/05/2008 - 21:00 — Megan C

Megan C

That is a fantastic poem! honestly I love it! the rhyming couplets are great! if I was aloud to give you house points I would give you 5hp!

Megan C

:D

Sun, 18/05/2008 - 08:58 — Mr Furness

Mr Furness

I really enjoyed reading your comment on Angelica's poem. Not only did the sun streaming through my bedroom wake me up with a smile, but reading all your comments have done the same too.

You gave a really good explanation as to why Angelica deserves the house points that you've given her. I think she should accept them. :-)