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My chocolate poem

Tue, 06/05/2008 - 17:42 — Billy P

hello everyone

today in class we have been making chocolate poems. Here is mine

 

Its so dreamy,

Cause its really creamy

on a train

going through the rain.

its so cool

it  melts in wool

without this bar

you wont get far

 

 

        by billy :^):^)

Comments

Thu, 08/05/2008 - 07:37 — Alexandra S

Alexandra S

Hi Billy, your poem is making me hungry. Brilliant.
Alexandra S

Tue, 20/05/2008 - 16:37 — Billy P

billy p

hi alex,
thanks for the nice comment

Sun, 11/05/2008 - 08:58 — Mr Furness

Mr Furness

I'm really pleased that you were encouraged to go home today and write another poem after our work today. It really warmed me to think that you hadn't stopped learning and remembering some of the things we talked about.

I wonder what chocolate bar you were imagining?

Tue, 20/05/2008 - 16:43 — Angelica C03

Angelica C03

Hi Billy, your poem is really yummy it nearly made
me want to eat it.

Wed, 21/05/2008 - 19:21 — Megan C

Megan C

Hi Billy, my Mum said your poem is really good! I like it aswell!

P.S you mentioned your last name

Megan C

If I could give you house points I would give you...

3HP