Chocolate Poems

Hello everyone, Today we have been learning about Chocolate Poems here is mine

I love the cream,

It makes me want to dream.

It is a fantastic bar,

I ate it in my car.

It was crunchy,

It was munchy.

It was yummy,

Now it is in my tummy.

 

Maybe all the others in my class can share some of theirs

Alexandra S

Comments

Jonathan S

Nice blog Alex

Hi Alex i love your poem

Hi Alex i love your poem about chocolate

Alexandra S

Thank you:-)

Mr Furness

Like Billy, you were definitely excited about writing poems and so you went home to write another one. Did many chocolate bars get eaten whilst you were thinking of ideas for this poem!?