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Fri, 25/04/2008 - 14:44 — Marie W

Mrs Leslie wanted us to do a story for when she goes too University  and she rwill show are work too all the other people at University.

One day a terrible disaster happened! 

It was a windy and stormy day so they
went of for a walk through the forest.
Suddenly they heard a noise!!! “Aaaah”
screamed all of them. Out of nowhere
appeared a little rabbit, white and black
Simultaneously it began to talk in a funny   voice very weirdly. It said “how do you do?”
Snow White replied “where did you come from?”
“Well follow me and you will see”
“Woo hoo this goes follow the leader”.
 
 
Suddenly the little rabbit said “we’re
here”.
Snow White said “is this it?”
The little rabbit “said I guess so”
“What, this big tree is it?”  Said a very surprised elf. 
“We’re all ready” so they all started to climb up the tree. They went past a big house in the tree. There was a party going on in the house with lots of rabbits.
“This is where I live and these are all my friends” said the rabbit. So Snow White and the elves joined in the party. They had a lovely time and there were lots of carrots and chocolate ice cream to eat. 
The storm had stopped and it was time for Snow White and the elves to go home. “Thank you for a lovely time” they said to the rabbits.
“We hope that we can see you again” said the rabbits. 
 
Snow White and the elves made their way home, feeling very tired but very happy!
Once upon a time there lived a princess called Snow white and her elves. Her elves
are called Bob, Tom, Jim, Jelly, and they
lived in a tree house. Her clothes were pink
and her beautiful slippers were the colour of sprucely gold.  

 

One day a terrible disaster happened! 
It was a windy and stormy day so they
went of for a walk through the forest.
Suddenly they heard a noise!!! “Aaaah”
screamed all of them. Out of nowhere
appeared a little rabbit, white and black
Simultaneously it began to talk in a funny   voice very weirdly. It said “how do you do?”
Snow White replied “where did you come from?”
“Well follow me and you will see”
“Woo hoo this goes follow the leader”.
 
 
Suddenly the little rabbit said “we’re
here”.
Snow White said “is this it?”
The little rabbit “said I guess so”
“What, this big tree is it?”  Said a very surprised elf. 
“We’re all ready” so they all started to climb up the tree. They went past a big house in the tree. There was a party going on in the house with lots of rabbits.
“This is where I live and these are all my friends” said the rabbit. So Snow White and the elves joined in the party. They had a lovely time and there were lots of carrots and chocolate ice cream to eat. 
The storm had stopped and it was time for Snow White and the elves to go home. “Thank you for a lovely time” they said to the rabbits.
“We hope that we can see you again” said the rabbits. 
 
Snow White and the elves made their way home, feeling very tired but very happy! bymarie w

 

Comments

Sun, 27/04/2008 - 09:04 — Mr Furness

Mr Furness

An amazing story, Marie. Did you notice the children's reaction as we read your story aloud? The children were all listening very carefully and were enjoying what you had written, just like any other author, such as Roald Dahl! I hope Miss Wyatt's class will also enjoy reading and listening to your story.

I am delighted with the progress you are making. As Mr Kyriacou would say 'Keep it up!'

Sun, 27/04/2008 - 18:15 — Mrs Leslie

Mrs Leslie

Hello Marie

I am so pleased that you have shared your story with everyone and I know that they will have enjoyed reading it. Just wait until they see the finished book with all the pictures and your name on the cover!

I am sure that you will go on to write many more stories and I look forward to reading them.

Mrs Leslie