Brook J's blog

Driftwood Design


Driftwood Design

 I chose this design because it's simple and it has basic colours.

 

My persuasive letter

 

 

Kings Road Primary School

Chelmsford

Essex

CM1 2BB

 

Cadburys world

Bournville Lane

Bournville

Birmingham

B30 2lu

 

Monday 2nd June 2008

 

Dear Mr Clarkson,

         I am writing to you because I have created a wonderful chocolate bar that I would like you to produce and sell. It would be grateful if you could produce and sell my chocolate bar (I think you are a great chocolate company).

 

         I am Brook  the head of Mega Choca Stars. I created the chocolate bar with my team. I have put a mouth-watering sample on the letter.

 

         My chocolate bar tastes creamy in the centre then the rest of the chocolate is milk chocolate. The look (shape) of my chocolate is a cuboid.  The texture of my chocolate is had. My chocolate bar smells lovely when you smell the sent it make you drift to the chocolate. The wrapper of my chocolate is a bit funky it has stars and lots more. I want all kinds of ages to experience my chocolate.

 

          I am just trying to say that I want you produce and sell my chocolate bar(please could you do what I say).

 

 

Your Sincerely

Brook J

Being a head teacher


When I was the head teacher on 27th march I got to go on Mr Kyriacou's computer and I got to ring the office ladys to get a Breakaway and a drink. It's fun being the head teacher. First I had  to write about book day to some teachers so that they didn't foget. Next I got a breakaway and a drink.Then I wrote this blog.

Egg panting

On Tuesday 18th March JF9 were panting hollow eggs. First of all are homework was to make an invention to take an egg to school. At home I came up with an idea. My idea was a box (without a lid) made out of Lego. Next I wraped the egg in bubble wrap.

What I have leant


 

I have learnt to get better at reading because we have been doing more reading.
 
I have been doing lots of reading at school and home. The last few books I have been reading have been written by Jacqueline Wilson. The books I read are Double Act, The story of Tracy Beaker, Cliff hanger and Buried alive ( Buried alive is the sequel to Cliff hanger ). The book I am reading now is called The Bed and Breakfast star I have read about a quarter of it. That is by Jacqueline Wilson.

 

My island


In class we have been designing are own island. People have lots of imatination. On my island I have lots of shops. I have seen lots of island what I think are very good. Also on my island I have a big swimming pool full of chocolate. I have a school, university, nursery and a job centre. Right in the middle of my island there is a very big chocolate foutain.

Help Mr Furness


I am trying to upload a picture of my own and it keeps asking me for a URL.  Can you help please?

My chess weekend

On Saturday 26th of January, Year 4 Kings Road chess team competed in a competition to go to the semi final in a Pontins in Hemsby. We eached played five matches.

Most people in our team won four or more games I thought everyone did well. I won four out of five games. The matches I won I took their queen and two castles but the match I lost was quite hard.

 

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